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These Winter Nights by Dragon-of-Faith

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:33< as usual, i'll start out with th3 good stuff in th3 pictur3 ^^
--w3ll, th3 backround is b3autifull, i lik3 how u us3d th3 pictur3 (th3 tr33s and hills) and combin3d it with fog and a picutr3 of th3 s3tting sun furr an 3ff3ct that mak3s it s33m lik3 it's furrrom a fairytal3. Sapphir3 looks r3ally purrr3tty up th3r3 in th3 frount, but mayb3 a bit s3nt3m3ntal?* Th3 shading was wond3rfull th3r3, too ^^ I also lik3 how th3 bord3r kind of fad3s into th3 actual pictur3. Plus th3 us3 of light in this is stunning.

and now th3 point3rs ^^' you r3ally dont hav3 to list3n to this part, but i giv3 point3rs in most of my critiqu3s, soo...
-- on Sapphir3, th3r3's no lin3-art, i dunno if this was th3 styl3 you w3r3 doing, but i just think that it would look a bit cl3an3r if th3r3 was lin3art. But th3n again, that's my opinion, and purrrobably alot of ppl would dissagr33.

All in all,, you did a furry good job and your an amazing artist and i'm luck3y to hav3 such a tal3nt3d purrrson as my furrri3nd. K33p up th3 good work, SD!
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Dragon-of-Faith Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much for the critique ^^
Good stuff first: Thank you very much ^^ I worked on more deatils for the shading, and was trying to put more realism.
Bad stuff: That was the style I was going for. Realism in a sorta different style. Im just practicing on doing lineless drawings, but its still rather difficult. XD Thank you again!
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SweetlyViolent Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:33< cool! th3 styl3 looks gr3at btw ^^i just was3nt sur3 ortz""
srry bout that!
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Dragon-of-Faith Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
No, its okay ^^ THank you again!
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